Review Replies for Paradise Lost, Ch.4

I was reading over the last chapter and realized I'd accidentally spelled Satan as Stan.  Woo, boy.  I'll change that.  *laughing in embarassment*

akuma-river
What will Harry do when Riddle comes for him? What will Draco do?  
Who said Riddle's coming back for Harry?  He's got a whole gang of Death Eaters still out there.  As for what Draco will do....well, that was one of the most fun parts to write.

What will Harry do with finding out Draco's involvement with the Death Eaters?
Draco wasn't directly involved, so it'll be a mixed reaction.  Honestly, it's a little thing compared to the truth of who Draco really is.

Also is Severus against or with Draco's plans with Harry, or Lucius and his downfall?
A little of both, but he's ultimately loyal only to Draco.

Keep up the most awesome work, coolsa.
Thanks.

gatogirl1
How extensive of research do/have you pulled to write this? Or is this just a sample of your innate knowledge and brilliancy? 
Some of it is stuff I'd already known from reading.  Some parts had to be researched, because I'd realized I'd write myself into situations and that I was lacking some background info.  It's challenging, and much more interesting than any school research project I've ever had to do.  Even if people decided they didn't like it I'd still write it, simply because it's more fun than any other fic I've done.

And getting their claws on Harry again? [shivers to think of what Draco would do]
Again, this was my favorite part to write so far.  :)  It also gave me a chance to introduce how I imagine Hell to be, if I had ever believed in it, and Satan's character.

[Sudden thought] What DOES Draco want with Harry now? He claims to his minions he's just playing around *coughbullcrapcough*, but it seems to me that after the horrible earlier affair, perhaps Harry was brought to Draco's attention...and is in some way highly desireable...why or what or whatamuhuh, I have no clue.
*blinks and reads that paragraph again*  As sweet as Draco appears, he really is just playing around....at first.  I fear you guys are going to hate him in a few chapters.  Really, RIddle has nothing to do with Draco's sudden interest in Harry, it was just a coincidence that means a bunch of future angst.  Not that we needed any more.

Thank you for your reviews.  I hate people touching me, but....*glomps her readers*

fic - King Raven

I've started a FInal Fantasy VIII fic that currently has no real plot beyond a few vague ideas.  I don't know if I'll ever make it a proper story, but I thought I'd put up this little bit anyway for kicks.  I was on a let's-read-every-British-writer-in-my-mini-library binge, which I'm going to claim accounts for the slightly different writing style.

King Raven
Pairing: Seifer/Squall
Summary: [AU.SxS] In a fit of recklessness, Seifer steals away his Sorceress’ newest prisoner and escapes into the world of darkness and fear.  But this enigma of a prisoner has secrets of his own, ones that will change the course of Seifer’s fate forever.
Rating: R
Warnings: Blatant AU.  Torture, angst—everything that goes along with those two characters in particular.

( King Raven )