Each person-especially Cloud, but really all of them-- notices things and reacts to them in a way that is unique to his or her own personality. It makes the story flow in a very natural way, and puts the readers right smack inside the character's head.
This is incredibly wonderful to hear, thank you. Whatever other difficulties I'm having with the logistics of such a large-cast fic, that is something I definitely want to retain and improve upon.
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Date: 2012-02-26 08:56 pm (UTC)This is incredibly wonderful to hear, thank you. Whatever other difficulties I'm having with the logistics of such a large-cast fic, that is something I definitely want to retain and improve upon.
Thanks. :)