Nicely done, a good balance of politics and interaction between the characters. I would have like it to go on longer but that's just another sign of good writing.
I take it 'rokage' is an amalgamation of 'hokage' and 'rokudaime'- I was a little confused at first but since it kept appearing it's obviously not a typo...
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Date: 2008-09-05 07:29 pm (UTC)Nicely done, a good balance of politics and interaction between the characters. I would have like it to go on longer but that's just another sign of good writing.
I take it 'rokage' is an amalgamation of 'hokage' and 'rokudaime'- I was a little confused at first but since it kept appearing it's obviously not a typo...